Nicely done! There were a few points where the language was a little unclear, though. The ropes shoot from the vampire's finger and wrap up the elf, then in the next sentence the elf is on the floor, but there's no description (or implication) of the elf falling. Also, in the last sentence, is it supposed to be that she "plunged" her teeth in, rather than "lounged?" 

Overall, though, very enjoyable!